Hey :)

Boring intro, give it more life. Mixdown of the whole track is pretty bad, EQ, paning and compression are your friends. The main idea of the track isn't bad, but it's not working on this version. More variation, breaks, keep your listener attention.

Keep it up

You have some really great ideas and sounds going on here- however the track itself doesn't seem to move anywhere. I think a lot of this is because the drum structure never really changes.

The haunting synth that you use throughout is pretty cool, and I like the feel of it. Also, the mix seems a little muddy. I would recommend trying to get some frequency separation by spending a bit more time ... More working on the EQ.

Keep at the grind man- and if you get a chance I actually just posted a track and would love to hear your thoughts.