This track has a lot of potential.

The ideas are great. The incidental percusion is well done. The synth work is pretty good but could do with some care. The main pad could have a bit more dynamics, dying out slightly before it hits back in and could be slightly back in the mix. The mid synth that comes in could use a little dirtying up.

The drums need to be run through a compressor and be higher ... More in the mix as everything else drowns it out.

The bass is night but could do with some more dirt in the mids too.

A promising work that could be very good with some care.