This track seems to suit the little cartoon picture you've got for it, if that makes sense? I think the drums sound cool on this and the background pads. I'm not sure that little break at 2.35 works to be honest and the tune maybe needs more variation. But that's personal opinion stuff. Maybe it's supposed to be a minimal tune.
Sounds good though

Found myself listening to this for a while, kinda got lost in thought, very good for a WIP, nice work :)