Oh man this track really starts full of expectations and in general it's quite good. But for my taste there seems to be a lack of elements that you could use for your arrangement. Becasue of that fact you only add new drums to your chorus and later you switch to a new bassline, that does not really fit my expectations from the intro. Keep on!!

This is wonderful. The choice of sounds and instruments is spot on. The subtleties are great and make a nice whole. I especially liked when the mid bass stabs and new percussion come in. This is followed by a section that somehow seems to grow in intensity by remaining constant. I was ready to call out the length and structure but then on another listen is actually has a measured hypnotic quality ... More that the repetition and length really push. This track really pulls you along.

The production isn't perfect yet, but it is getting there. The nice verby snare could be more prominent and the perc needs a bit of eq to fit in better. Also the mid bass stabs could have a going over to make them extra special sounding (some interesting distos and maybe some notch filtering and eq work). Some light delay and or reverb on them would be cool too. I like the low rumble bass but the sub could be boosted slightly with some of the low mid balanced just slightly. Everything else is fantastic sound wise.

Another pass at the mix down and this could be a classic.